Но иначе описанията му са наистина нелоши, с известна мелодичност на изказа. Не е Толкин в никакъв случай, но не е без потенциал (кофти само дето се е главозамаял с подобни изказвания):
At midday they stopped for a brief rest. When they resumed their journey, Eragon noticed that the haze had thinned since morning, and the distant smudges had gained definition.
No longer were they indistinct purple-blue lumps, but rather broad, forest-covered mounds with clear outlines. The air above them was pale white, bleached of its usual hue – all color seemed to have been leached out of a horizontal band of sky that lay on top of the hills and extended to the horizon’s edges.
Хмм, сравняваш го с добър писател. Мисля, че e по-скоро от "класата" на Тери Брукс.П.С. За протокола стегнат стил има Гемел.
